What do you think of these lyrics? Feedback?

For a metal song, Hey this is really good. I mean I love the motto. I mean most great metal songs have a great moto behind them when the lyrics are set, and thats a great quality to keep. If your going to submit lyrics that have no copyright, I dont think its a good idea to put them up here, thats why I never post my work up on here. but its still great how your brave enough to put your work. Keep that up. When you compose this as music, how I picture this being really fast and with a guitar solo and everything.. But you have your own vision! this is just what i see. Good luck :D Im a classic rock preformer, so im glad to hear about this ;)